Sunday, November 2, 2014

Dialectic: Take Three!

I figured since no one had commented on my previous draft, I'd update my post to get more accurate feedback.


This is incomplete and a lot of the more important bits are still unwritten, but I'd love your feedback. Specifically, I'd like to know where you might want to hear more. Is the event itself clear? My goal is to begin the dialectic with dialogue, yes, but also to establish the context for a discussion on how to respond to social media related panic. I may even extend some of that conversation to this panic in school-aged children, like those affected in this example. Also, if you have read anything about social media benefitting in disaster response or enacting panic, I'd love to hear your two cents. I will be diving into a new book by Liza Potts this weekend to see if she can shed some light and help me generate some ideas for the meatiest part of my dialectic. Thanks!
Because this event took place over several days, I have chosen to break the dialectic into stages. Each stage represents a dialogue that could have taken place during that time. Together, they function to provide context and lead into the problem-solving area of the dialectic between the scholar and the high school principal.


Wednesday September 3, 2014

Student/child: I can’t go to school tomorrow. Something bad is going to happen.

Parent: What? Why do you say that?

Student/child: I saw it on Instagram. Those guys, the ones who call themselves The Merry Men, tagged our campus. It was all over Instagram.

Parent: The Merry Men? Aren’t those the people who tagged the Catholic Church a month ago with antiestablishment propaganda? They tagged the school?

Student/child: Yeah, two nights ago – on Tuesday. They were bragging all over Instagram. Now everybody is freaking out on Twitter because somebody is saying they are going to shoot up the school tomorrow!

Parent: Okay. There is absolutely no way that I am letting you go to school tomorrow. With all of the school shootings over the last few years, we are not risking this for one day of class. Plus, I would be a nervous wreck all day. I wonder how the school supervisors are going to handle this?

Thursday September 4, 2014

Principal: After last night, I didn’t think this week could get any worse. First, our campus was tagged by The Merry Men. Then, there was tremendous social media chatter about a shooting today. This isn’t the sort of thing I take lightly, especially not with the rising wave of school shootings. Bullard High students must remain safe, but at what cost? We cannot live in fear. We cannot forgo education in light of panic. That is why we went on high alert. Although I don’t believe that guns are the solution to our problems, these guns held by highly trained officers of the law might prevent these insane antiestablishment Merry Men from instilling more fear, harm, and possibly fatalities here on our campus. And if guns in the right hands on the right days will prevent that, then I am an advocate for guns. Bombs are a different story.

Late this morning, around 11:00 am, I felt hollow after reading an email stating there was a bomb on my campus. A bomb. On my campus. The panic generated by last night’s Instagram threat was enough to cause too many students to avoid school today, and who can blame them? Now, I have no choice but to close the campus early even though we have swept the campus and found that both threats have been false. The panic was too widespread. Students didn’t take it seriously enough and parents overreacted. It seems that the days before social media prevailed were simpler times, but there is no going back. So how can we mitigate or even circumnavigate this kind of event in future?

In Reflection

Scholar: The events at Bullard High School were eye opening, but thankfully not tragic. Did the principal and other leadership make wise and rational decisions? Yes. Although closing the campus early did not remove the panic, it did eliminate possible risk and acknowledged that the fear was too extreme for the educational system to function properly.

Principal: But over 800 students sacrificed both their freedom and education that day.

Scholar: This is true; however, keeping them in the classroom would not necessarily have alleviated those losses. When the mind is occupied with another subject, be it pleasant or fearful, other focus is lost. If these children had remained in their classes, they would not have retained the lessons taught. Their minds would have been on the possible risk involved for themselves and their friends. And there was also the small chance that physical harm would come to pass on the campus. Unfortunately, violence has become an increasingly common occurrence in educational settings. Releasing students was the best decision for you, your campus, and everyone involved.

Principal: Although it was a difficult decision, I agree. It was the best option of those available. But this may not be an isolated event. With social media growing, it is easier for any threats, real or fake, to incite panic.

Scholar: This may be true, but there was panic before social media. You may have heard the saying that people are smart, rational beings, but crowds are stupid and emotional beasts. Sadly, this tends to be true. But we used to think of these crowds in the traditional sense – people gathered in one centralized location to picket or rally torch-and-pitchfork-style against a common fear. But times have changed. Now, crowds can be virtual. Panic can be shared internationally. What was once considered a local issue can now be viewed nationally or even globally.

Principal: Yes, but social media has added to this, and has changed it. Virtually all of my students have some sort of social media profile. While Instagram is the most popular right now, Facebook and Twitter are still contenders. And because so many people use social media and because they are so intertwined, information travels at light speed. When young people decide something is worth sharing, it goes viral immediately. Often times, that information is simply pop culture – a cat video, someone doing something stupid who got caught on tape, a bit of celebrity gossip – but now I have seen how a threat can also go viral. What may start out as an act of goodwill – of sharing knowledge – easily snowballs into mass panic. And these young users don’t have the power to make real changes. They have the power to share information, but not to make sure their school is safe and their friends are protected. No matter how inspired or enamored they may be by superheroes, most cannot and should not take a stand in these sorts of situations.

Scholar: That fact has not changed. Most people are not destined to be heroes, for myriad reasons. So the real issue is twofold. First, can we remove panic? The answer is unequivocally no. The news tells us on a daily basis what we should fear. In 2001 it was Anthrax, then it was West Nile. In 2005, the Bird Flu. A few years later, the world was going to end because of a bad economy. Obama Care carried the torch in 2011, and now it’s Ebola. Any of these issues may legitimately warrant concern, but were they worth widespread panic? Probably not, but the fact remains that panic ensues.

This was the case even before social media, and even before modern technology as we know it. The Internet has simply made it easier for the average person to share what she knows, be that opinion, fact, or a melding of the two.

Principal: Yes, I used to think that was a good thing. Students had all sorts of information at their fingertips. If we didn’t have funding for additional library books, it didn’t matter; we had computers. Although students did not always know how to find the right information, the information was there for them to find.

Scholar: But that is the crux: we must find the right information. Within the last twenty years, information transitioned from being generated by experts to being generated by anyone with a blog. We used the peer review process to make sure anything available was accurate and well grounded, but that is no longer the case. This is not to bemoan the old days; it is simply to examine a reality. Once, not long ago, readers knew they may not agree with an author, but the information within the article would be sound. Those articles still exist, but they are now nestled amongst ungrounded rants and unqualified statements presented as facts, which makes distinguishing truth from hearsay significantly more challenging.

The cause of this new kind of panic is rooted in this: uncensored authorship. Not only has uncensored authorship allowed any uneducated – and I do not mean this simply in the formal sense of the word – person to make a statement about any given subject, it has driven a shift towards sensationalism and relevance. The news, once a trusted source for accurate information, has shifted its gaze towards stories and presentation that garner increased audiences, not informed audiences. Therefore, when there is a small outbreak of salmonella poisoning, it becomes a pandemic, with or without warrant. Social media has taken this to the next level. This is most evident in parody websites, like The Onion. Blatantly fallacious mock news stories are posted on these sites and are often shared via sites like Facebook and Twitter. However, many users are accustomed to trusting whatever they see and they, therefore, take the article as truth. With the best of intentions, this misinformed user shares the article with friends, family, and often strangers, accompanied with words of excitement or caution, until someone (hopefully) sets the user straight. If such an obviously falsified document can be mistaken for truth, imagine the erroneous beliefs that are generated through the sharing of misguided rants and new stories.

Principal: Yes, I see that on this campus every week and hear the teachers complaining about students who use faulty or untrustworthy sources as their research. And clearly, panic can be generated from these false and sensationalist sources. But then the question is what can we do about it?  

Scholar: Excellent question, and it brings me to my second point. If panic cannot be eliminated, then we must establish methods to monitor and deescalate it.

Principal: My sentiments exactly! But how can that be done? And more specifically, how can I enact this for my student population?


Scholar: Despite the additional pathos involved with the safety of minors, there are several strategies that could be put in place to nullify potential issues before complete panic ensues.

Friday, October 31, 2014

Dialectic... Take 2

This is very incomplete and, really, the most important bits are still unwritten, but I'd love your feedback. Specifically, I'd like to know where you might want to hear more. Is the event itself clear? My goal is to begin the dialectic with dialogue, yes, but also to establish the context for a discussion on how to respond to social media related panic. I may even extend some of that conversation to this panic in school-aged children, like those affected in this example. Also, if you have read anything about social media benefitting in disaster response or enacting panic, I'd love to hear your two cents. I will be diving into a new book by Liza Potts this weekend to see if she can shed some light and help me generate some ideas for the meatiest part of my dialectic. Thanks!


I hope this is okay, but I wanted to do a somewhat cinematic dialectic that spans more than one day because of the way this specific event played out.

Wednesday September 3, 2014
Student/child: I can’t go to school tomorrow. Something bad is going to happen.
Parent: What? Why do you say that?
Student/child: I saw it on Instagram. Those guys, the ones who call themselves The Merry Men, tagged our campus. It was all over Instagram.
Parent: The Merry Men? Aren’t those the people who tagged the Catholic Church a month ago with antiestablishment propaganda? They tagged the school?
Student/child: Yeah, two nights ago – on Tuesday. They were bragging all over Instagram. Now everybody is freaking out on Twitter because somebody is saying they are going to shoot up the school tomorrow!
Parent: Okay. There is absolutely no way that I am letting you go to school tomorrow. With all of the school shootings over the last few years, we are not risking this for one day of class. Plus, I would be a nervous wreck all day. I wonder how the school supervisors are going to handle this?

Thursday September 4, 2014
Principal: After last night, I didn’t think this week could get any worse. First, our campus was tagged by The Merry Men. Then, there was tremendous social media chatter about a shooting today. This isn’t the sort of thing I take lightly, especially not with the rising wave of school shootings. Bullard High students must remain safe, but at what cost? We cannot live in fear. We cannot forgo education in light of panic. That is why we went on high alert. Although I don’t believe that guns are the solution to our problems, these guns held by highly trained officers of the law might prevent these insane antiestablishment Merry Men from instilling more fear, harm, and possibly fatalities here on our campus. And if guns in the right hands on the right days will prevent that, then I am an advocate for guns. Bombs are a different story.

Late this morning, around 11:00 am, I felt hollow after reading an email stating there was a bomb on my campus. A bomb. On my campus. The panic generated by last night’s Instagram threat was enough to cause too many students to avoid school today, and who can blame them? Now, I have no choice but to close the campus early even though we have swept the campus and found that both threats have been hollow. The panic was too widespread. Students didn’t take it seriously enough and parents overreacted. It seems that the days before social media prevailed were simpler times, but there is no going back. So how can we mitigate or even circumnavigate this kind of event in future?


** I know the remainder of this is the really important part, but I haven’t quite gotten there yet. With Dr. Rice’s help, I just got the general structure down. From here, I will have the principal and a scholar debate the different options for handling this kind of social media event in future.



Friday, October 24, 2014

Prewriting Ideas: Contemporary Dialectic

I want to focus on the same issue that I will be presenting to the class at the beginning of December: the rhetoric of panic. Specifically, I will be exploring an instance of Twitter that affected a local high school and caused 800+ students to miss classes. This is the first time I've tried to put these ideas into print, so bear with me. And I'd appreciate any feedback you'd like to give.

Preamble: In this section I'd like to give a brief overview of the context of this particular event, but also an equally brief overview of the conversation going on about social media. Unfortunately, this is a new area of study for me (although I think it is also the new direction I'll be going for my dissertation) so I am a bit scholar/resource light. However, I know just from the news, social media (yes, I acknowledge the irony there), and through my husband (who is much more up to date on current events than I) that social media is seen as having great potential in disaster scenarios. However, my perspective is that it can also induce panic, as it did in this (and other) situations. So, I want to quickly cover that with a few recent incidents and hopefully a scholar or two. (Suggestions are appreciated.)

The Dialectic/Questions: If I'm understanding the directions, I think that my question can remain larger (Is there serious risk of social media, like Twitter, to make certain situations worse?). But I'm afraid this may be too broad/general. Thoughts? But if my question is broader, then my example and discussion can be about this specific example that I want to explore. Or should I ask my question about the specific example? (Is it possible to counteract panic spread on social media? Should underage social media users be monitored by parents/schools/etc to avoid harmful behaviors?) I'm also trying to think about what might be most beneficial to me moving towards my dissertation.

Regardless, I think most of my dialectic will be about the specific high school incident, which means I should address questions like these:

- If rhetoric really is a blend of knowledge and action (Bacon??) then why is social media seen as so effective at causing action? (Or should this be my initial question?!)
- What is an example of this? ALS challenge, disaster preparation, Twitter chatter-lead panic regarding a clearly dissolved bomb threat.
- How else could we interpret this scenario?
- What do you think causes this to happen?
- What are some of the long-term effects?
- What should we do to change this or can it be changed?

I guess at this stage, my biggest concern (unless you see something that is off base here) is getting my initial question down. I tend to think too big for these sorts of things. I am also trying to work towards a "so what?" in terms of this assignment, my presentation, and my dissertation. I see thing thing happening, but I'm not sure what I want to argue about it, so I'm' still working on this aspect.




Tuesday, October 21, 2014

A Letter of Desired Entreaty

To Professor Richard Rice, wise and gracious master of locution, from Sheri McClure-Baker, in recognition to her inferiority in regards to your rhetorical prowess.

This humble applicant wishes goodwill upon you and yours, and beseeches your gracious approval and glad tidings to the program. I seek to explore the implications of shifting tides in rhetoric and pedagogy. The ebbing importance of orator has lead to the flow of audience awareness, and I feel many have been left adrift. So what of the student who knows not of the common academic tongue? How shall we shift our instruction to address her needs?

Therefore, I importune you for admittance to your fair program so these questions may be answered. With your excellent guidance and good graces, I will seek to understand how diverse student populations may flower most fully in the light and wisdom of professors such as yourself.

With eternal graciousness and wholehearted entreaty, Sheri McClure-Baker


Sunday, October 19, 2014

Musings on Home

** Sorry. A crazy week caused my brain to glitch and I posted this in my professional website instead of here in my Blogger account. I was wondering why no one had commented! **
Hello students! I am going to try to address each of your questions here. So, here we go!
When we received this assignment from Dr. Rice, I began thinking about home and what it means to me. It was a more challenging idea than I had expected. When I first began thinking about "home," these five words came to mind: house, comfort, ownership, family, and personalization. I was speaking with my husband about this today, and that conversation caused my ideas to shift a bit. At first, home represented an intersection between a physical location where I live and the emotional fingerprint of that place. For example, when my husband and I bought our house six years ago, it was special because it was our first house; however, it did not initially feel like a home. But there were things about it that were homey right from the start. I felt my aunt's presence in the breeze blowing through a large tree in the backyard and the living room reminded me of my house growing up; however, it wasn't until we personalized the house by adding decorations, furniture, and memories that it felt like a home. So in that way home does feel closely related to my identity. I take pride in being a homeowner and in how we have chosen to present our home. I feel that others get a sense of who we are when they enter our house. People have said that our house is very relaxing and that they feel comfortable there when they visit, which is part of what "home" means to me, and it's part of our identity. We like to entertain, so when people say they feel welcome and comfortable in our home we appreciate that.
I also believe that home is the only place I can be mindful and at ease during chaos and confusion. Right now, my life is hectic. I am a full time professor, a doctoral student at Texas Tech, a wife, and a mother of a 7 month old boy. My life is truly chaos. But as busy as my life is, I really only allow myself to relax and focus when I am in my house. I think this is because we have created an environment or habitat that makes us happy. We control it and it is filled with memories and experiences that have made us who we are. So again I return to my home being a part of my identity. So I suppose homelessness, for me, would be not having a place that reflects who I am and where I can feel truly relaxed. This is not to say that I am always relaxed when I am home; but I am most able to be myself and kick up my feet when I am at home. Culturally speaking, homelessness here is more about not having a dwelling space to call your own. We have homeless shelters, which provide physical spaces for those in need, but the inhabitants don't own these spaces either in a monetary or personal sense. But there is something beyond that. For instance, when I travel, my hotel room can feel like home. It is not Home with a capital H - that is reserved for the place I have purchased and where my family lives - but there is something about making even a hotel room my own. Right now, I am actually in a hotel with my family. Our stuff is scattered around and when we first arrived we set to work putting some things in drawers, setting up a crib for the baby, and hanging up a few things. Once that was done, it became home, albeit temporary.
I believe language can have a similar affect. My family and close friends have a discourse - a way of speaking, inside jokes, and past experiences we can reference - that make sense to us alone. When I am with these people, I feel like I am home. I suppose this does, to some extent, trump the idea of location. Being with these people can be "home," but that is not what I generally think of as "home."
Finally, for the cultural questions. It's hard to explain what it feels like to be an American because I don't know anything different. It just feels normal to me. With that said, I dislike patriotism and tend to think negatively of people when they are extremely patriotic. This is because I generally associate patriotism with blind faith in our country, which often removes people's ability to think critically. But this does not meant that I am not appreciative of the freedoms that I have here. However, it also makes me sad to know how far behind our educational system (especially for children) is when viewed globally. We are only casually required to learn another language and our population tends to be very naive of global events. Other parts of the world are so much more aware of what is going on outside of their own cultural bubble, and there I think America has failed overall.
I don't know a ton about India, but I have a positive impression of it. I have heard that it is very busy and chaotic, which doesn't sound like something I would love to be immersed in every day; however, I love Indian food and the colorful clothing I see represented in images. One of my favorite movies is The Darjeeling Limited by Wes Anderson, which takes place in India. Although I'm sure it's not completely accurate, I love the country as I see it through Anderson's eyes. The beauty of the people and the land, the faith, and the genuine spirit of the people are all very appealing to me. I would love it if you shared what being Indian feels like to you.
I hope that answers your questions! Thanks for such thoughtful questions. :)
Shidish - What are the five things that come to mind when you hear the word home?

Tuesday, September 30, 2014

To my Teaching Philosophy!

Hi class! So, I'm working on creating a professional page for myself, which will include my teaching philosophy. It will eventually be a hypertext with links to various things, including additional explanations of how our course concepts fit into it, but right now it is just the text. I've already gotten feedback on it from Dr. Rice, but I haven't had a chance to revise yet. If you are willing, please take a look! It's on Wordpress because I don't trust Blogger long-term. It ate one of my other blogs a year ago. If you can't leave comments there, you can leave them in the comments section here. This is the link:

sherimcclurebaker.com

Saturday, September 27, 2014

Responding to Students

I responded to these four students this week. Sorry, I didn't see the post about us sharing links to those comments until late today. I made three of these four posts before our Friday deadline.


Priya Rathod: http://priyarathod.blogspot.in/2014/09/compose-your-first-paragraph-for-your.html

Ayushree Ganga: http://ayushree-gangal.blogspot.in/2014/09/peer-review.html#comment-form

Koishore Roy: http://koishore.blogspot.com/2014/09/thesis-statement.html#comment-form

Nainika Dinesh: http://nainikadineshashoka.blogspot.com/2014/09/introduction-to-essay.html?showComment=1411802980852#c4943832821061173070


I know that we were supposed to refer to style, invention, and arrangement in our responses, but I found that challenging to do. First of all, because I didn't want to use terms that the students may not be familiar with. Secondly, because I was more interested in their content than in their conventions. However, I thought I'd do some reflecting here on how I saw those elements come through in these blogs.

I began by reading Ayushree's post on her peer review process. In this blog post, I saw a lot of invention and thinking about arrangement. Although the post itself wasn't remarkable in it's presentation, I could see that Ayushree was thinking about how to present ideas and what it meant to write for an audience, which was mainly what I wrote my response about. I thought she did this quite well.

I then read Koishore's "Critical Thinking and Home." I couldn't see his process/invention, but I commented on an element of style at the end of the interaction that really made it sound like him (even though I don't know him). I'm not sure if it is appropriate for his audience because I don't know to whom he plans to write, but it made me more interested and I felt a stronger connection to him. Perhaps this is a subtle way that he developed ethos in his short piece of writing.

My third response was to Priya whose definition of home I found interesting, but I struggled with a lack of clarity in some of her ideas. This could be an underdeveloped sense of style or arrangement; but since she is early in the writing process, I know she can revise for this. Much of the rest of the paragraph is very articulate and shows strong style and arrangement. 

Finally, I responded to Nainika because she read and responded to my blog. Her "introduction" (which was more of an essay) was more developed than the other three, so I really got to see her ability to arrange her ideas, respond to her sources, and flesh out her ideas. Because this was clearly not the beginning of her thought process on "home," I can't say that I saw invention, but style and arrangement were very strong throughout. I loved the analogy she drew between our personal definitions of "home" and Microsoft's use of "home" in their systems. This helped to draw in the reader (arrangement) and get her interested. Her language was clear and strong (style) and the sources she used were varied, which would appeal to a larger audience. Overall, I thought this was a very strong draft.

This was a really fun blog post assignment. I really hope to make time to read more of these student's writing throughout our class!